100 Words— The Wedding/Dark Secrets 5/11/13

May 12, 2013 by patrickoscheen in Dreamer

(prompt photo 5/11/13) Dark Secrets

(prompt photo 5/11/13)
Dark Secrets

The cathedral was empty this Saturday morning. A tuxedo clad man sat glumly in the rear pew, head in hands. Only a brief few hours earlier there had been a crowd. The bright sun had shown in through the multicolored windows adding the air of a festival. The church had been filled with the gaiety of new hope. The people had laughed and whispered quietly among themselves. The light blue dresses mixed with the black formal suits and all of his family had packed into one side of the hall, waiting, hoping– delighted that he was finally going to marry.

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10 thoughts on “100 Words— The Wedding/Dark Secrets 5/11/13”

Corinne Rodrigues says:

May 12, 2013 at 11:34 am

She didn’t show? How awful! My Dad was supposed to raise the toast for a wedding – the girl showed and said no at the Church door! Chaos followed! 😉

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- patrickoscheen says:
  
  May 12, 2013 at 2:35 pm
  
  Yes it isn’t easy. Her dark secret…Who knows?
  
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Jessica Mokrzycki says:

May 13, 2013 at 1:42 pm

Leaves us hanging! I like your style of writing. Very fluent and descriptive.

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- patrickoscheen says:
  
  May 13, 2013 at 3:08 pm
  
  thank you Jessica!
  
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janu says:

May 14, 2013 at 5:32 am

Oh! made me curious.

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- patrickoscheen says:
  
  May 14, 2013 at 10:25 am
  
  thank you
  
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Jyothi Nair says:

May 15, 2013 at 8:47 am

Hmm… you must share her dark secret too! Why leave us curious? 🙂

http://www.heresmysay.com/100-words-on-saturday-dark-secret/

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- patrickoscheen says:
  
  May 15, 2013 at 11:46 am
  
  hahaha because I only get 100 words!
  
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Suzy says:

May 15, 2013 at 10:15 am

oh dear but perhaps better before than after.

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- patrickoscheen says:
  
  May 15, 2013 at 11:47 am
  
  I’m guessing it came out rather unexpectedly…and yes always better before!
  
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